Are they in a car ?? If so, I would change the pic.. I wrote some red marks on scene 1.. I would shorten that awkward part to : ” Yep ! , I’ve read the profs comments and he thinks I was cheating. I’ve never gotten scores this low and IF I don’t get my grades up .. ” ( drop the ” Well, Jazzi ” part , in the beginning.
Also, good topic. My school recently started Turnitin.com Cheating is RAMPANT at my school, either on purpose, or inadvertently … i am guessing the FORMER.