Yes, your PDF attachment worked perfectly! One small note about Twine that I can see here in this PDF (but couldn’t see in your week 8 version) is the tags. Overall, the tags on the passages are really for you, so you should do what works for you. However, for future projects, you might find it more useful to just use tags like “good” “bad” “info” that you can reuse for multiple passages. The tags are more like categories that contain multiple passages. By using a different tag for each passage, you are limiting some of the potential features like filtering for all passages with a particular tag.
That’s a minor quibble though–I think the scenario overall has a lot of great information in it, as I noted on your week 8 assignment!