Hi Christy,
Thanks so much for your feedback. Glad to hear you think I’m on the right track here. I didn’t want to develop more until you saw the changes I made based on your previous feedback. I agree with what you said regarding the description of the SMEs. I will streamline that section so that it looks more realistic and leave out some of those unnecessary details.
Regarding narrowing the scope of my scenario, I’ll think about your recommendations. My intention is still to take IDs through the entire process and I know that will make my scenario more complex but it’d feel strange to me to cut it short at this point just to get it done. I’ll work on it some more as soon as I have a chance and re-evaluate then.
Thanks again for everything!