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October 28, 2022 at 2:33 pm #26788
Christy Tucker
KeymasterPost a link to your story and note any development enhancements like scores that you added.
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November 22, 2022 at 2:25 pm #26884
Ronald Genech
Participanthttps://alltherage215.itch.io/twine-prototype-as-of-11-22
This is the link to my story.
password is bybs2022
I did not add any enhancements.
At this point, i am trying to focus and finish story / decision point enhancements, as opposed to special tech enhancements.Please let me know if there are any problems accessing my story.
Thanks very much,
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November 24, 2022 at 12:00 pm #26887
Ronald Genech
ParticipantHi Christy,
Were you able to access my story on itch.io ?
I placed the link and password up above.
Attached are 2 images – 1. Run Game, 2. Scene 1.
Please advise if there are access problems.
Thanks very much,
Happy Thanksgiving.
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November 28, 2022 at 9:48 pm #26894
Christy Tucker
KeymasterThanks for your patience! I was mostly offline last week for the Thanksgiving holiday.
I can open up your project on itch.io fine, but I can’t scroll down to get to the choices.
Can you please try editing the options? Under Embed options, try turning on “Enable scrollbars.”
I can reduce the size overall in the browser to get it to fit better, but having the scrollbars would probably make it easier.
I love that opening illustration! The images do add to the story, and I think this works well to just have a large hero image at the top and the text below (other than the no scroll bar issue). I’m not sure about the switch between illustrations and photos though. I wonder if you’d be better off using all illustrations or all photos throughout for a consistent style.
One flow issue: if you pick the good choice at the beginning to ask the team leader, then you get to a link about Korean culture. However, that passage ends with “Eventually, the misunderstanding is smoothed over…” which isn’t actually the choice I made. You might have to show a different hook depending on which choice they made. You can do that with a combo of if: and visited: macros. Let me know if you need code for that.
As a content note, do you need to define high-context and low-context cultures? In my experience, people don’t always understand the difference. I love the info on what to do and focus on in high-context cultures; those are great tips. This is one place where you might need the factual definition prior to the application though.
Overall, I think this is a great way to introduce Korean culture within a scenario. You are giving people a reason to pay attention with the decisions prior to giving them information. Therefore, even though there’s a lot of information shared about the culture, there’s a reason and context for it. This would work well for people who are new to Korean culture and aren’t familiar with it. I learned some new things too–thanks!
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